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Post  Mizo on Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:45 pm

Saiyan pride that is! DBZ ftw!

Saiyan Pride



The Rp

In a different galaxy to ours a young namekian gaurdian collected the dragon balls of his planet and called out the dragon. In an act of kindness the gaurdian asked the dragon to bring back a destroyed race and within an instant the planet was swarming with Saiyans. The inhabitants of the planet were eradicated, thier towns and monuments were obilterated and the Saiyans began again. A 100 years has passed, Saiyan culture is the only thing on the planet and things are back to the way they were. The Prince and King are off destroying and conquering planets for the new Saiyan race, while back on planet Vegeta the lower classes have revolt on their minds and the Elites oblivious in their arrogance. Is the planet on the verge of civil war?

Where do you fit in?

You are Saiyans, the mightiest race the Universe has ever known, you can choose from either;

The Elites

The usually arrogant, headstrong commanders of the armies. They tend to treat lower classes like lower Saiyans even though they have just as much potential as them. The Elites tend to don fancier armour and working scouters. They haven't caught on to the lower classes restlessness, but they soon will.

The lower classes

They tend to continue the headstrong nature of the Saiyan race, sharing in the pride. They hate the elites who oppress them, but in fear they follow their commands. The lower classes have less high tech armour usually and their scouters tend not to be in the best condition.

Character sheet

Description

Name: (Make it fit in with the DBZ Universe)
Age: (Don't make it too young or too old, 16-40 would be nice)
Gender: (Male or female?
Class: (Elite or lower class)

Physical appearance: (What body type are you? Built, slender, skinny? What is your tail like, it cant be super long or short, but is it roughed up etc What do they look like face-wise? Scars etc)
Eye colour: Black (All Saiyans have black eyes)
Hair style/colour: Black (All Saiyans have pointy hair in various styles, either that or bald, you can have long pointy hair like Raditz, but nothing like young Gohan etc)
Armour: (Make it fit with your class) Examples of armour: http://www.myfavoritegames.com/dragonball-z/Info/Dragonball-Z-GT-SaiyanArmor.htm
Scouter: Make it fit with your class) Example of a scouter: http://www.myfavoritegames.com/dragonball-z/Images/Scouter.gif

Bio

Personality: (What are they like? Cowards, brave? Arrogant? Tactical?)
History: (Doesn't have to be anything special, make it fit in with their personality and power level)
Inborn power level: (Put this purely for Rp reasons, between 1-10)

Fighting capablities

Solidier moves:

Ki blast: A blast of Ki from users body, usually palm.
Ki burst: A burst of ki from the users body pushing away close opponents.
Flash step: Moving at incredible speeds, usually to appear behind an opponent.
After image: User moves so fast they leave an after image, similiar to the flash step.

Ki and aura colour: (Whatever you want)
Signature moves: (Think Kamehameha, Big bang, finish buster, Masenko. Nothing that is totally overkill please. YOU START WITH TWO!)
Transformations unlocked: (None to begin with)
Power level: 2300


IT'S OVER 9,000!

Yes, we are all gonna have power levels which can be scouted and eventually felt. So how can we raise this level? Well, training, fighting, losing and even doing nothing.

Training

Make a post of your character training, simple. The specifics are as follows, make it clear that your post is a training one, for example put TRAINING POST in it and it will get judged with your power level gain being decided by the judge.

Fighting

Your power level can rise slightly during your fighting posts, but only critical posts will be given power level grants. FIGHTING POST needs to be in any fighting posts, spars count as fights, only with a PC though. At the end of fighting posts, you must place this;

Fighter 1 power level: (Put your power level, put your character's where Fighter 1 is)
Fighter 2 power level: (Put your opponent's power level, put your opponent's character's name where Fighter 2 is)

Winning, losing and draws

When you win you gain significant power, judged by the judge who marks the last post of the fight.

When you lose a fight you still gain significant power, but less than the winner, this is because of the Saiyan's innate ability to recover well. Again decided by the last judge.

If you decided to draw, depending on the length of the fight the final judge can award power.

Doing nothing?!?!?!?

Yep, i've decided to do this because it stops people from speeding ahead of everyone else uncontrollably. Whenever anyones power level rises every other character will be given a boost of a fraction of the power. It doesn't take from the orignal acheiver's power but simply makes sure they can't become too powerful, because then its not fair.

What if i miss someones post?

Everyone will be pmed if their power level changes, they will be asked to change it in their character sheet.

Judges?

Yea, a few people will be picked as judges. These are people who will follow a criteria for marking your power level raising posts. I will be one ofcourse i wont mark my own obviously, because thats not fair.

Code:
The criteria

Action:-
0-1 Boooooooring
2-3 Hmmm, some nice punches and ki blasts
4-5 Stop! I can't see through the blood!

Detail:-
0-1 Who did what now?
2-3 I know whats happened quite well
4-5 Wow, that's beautiful. I know everything, the character's feelings, movements, everything.

Dialogue:-
0-1 I cant tell what is speech and what isn't
2-3 I can just tell who is speaking
4-5 You've used colours for speech, italics for thought, nice

Statistics and playing to them:-
0-1 Ok, you just god modded and where are your end of post statistics?
2-3 Your still acting better than your power level, but your statistics are there atleast
4-5 You Roleplayed well according to your powerlevel and your statistics are done properly

Total: /20
Power level gain:


How to win!

Well thats simple, first to three Well, what will happen is a judge will grade your first fighting post, you must wait if you are the opponent for a judge post! Your score sets the bar, if your opponent scores higher than you in their next post, they win a point, if your score is higher than theres you win a point. When the original poster posts the next step of the fight the process begins again, however, if the person who lost the first round wins, they take the point off their opponent. Then its first to three! The person who wins gets to make a finishing post where they beat their opponent, probably unconcious, you CANNOT kill someone unless they state u can. There will be specific times when if you enter a fight with someone, maybe an NPC, that if you lose you will die, so be careful. If you want to run from a fight, you'll have to score atleast your opponents previous score -3. Got it? Good.

Judges

Mizo

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Character sheet

Description

Name: Diedara
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Class: Lower

Physical appearance: Diedara is a rugged looking young man, his features are sharp and his stare is piercing. His body is slender with slight muscle build in his arms and the usual torso of a warrior. He has numerous scars on his knuckles and the back of his hands. His tail is a dark shade of brown and roughed up.
Eye colour: Black
Hair style/colour: Black/Medium length down to his shoulders.
Armour: He wears a black jumpsuit beneath his black and battered armour. His armour has the shoulder holds not the pads, it doesn't have the crotch part, just the torso. It has many scratches across it.
Scouter: He has a red scouter with the usual scratches. His scouter works mostly, sometimes he has to hit it to make it work.

Bio

Personality: He is full of hatred for the elites and the weak, whether they are lower class or an elite. He hates those who give in to their oppressors. He tends to have allies rather than friends and treats them as such, he protects them in battle and vise versa, it is what he expects. He is brave, but intelligent, a perfect leader.
History: He was born into the lower classes, his family poor like everyone else's in his situation. He was trained like everyone else but never co-operated with his Elite masters and because of this his knuckles and hands were whipped with hot Ki. After years of punishment he began to keep his anger secret, following orders with a silent resentment. He and a group of other lower class Saiyans are training up to revolt against the Elites with the royalty absent.
Inborn power level: 3

Fighting capablities

Solidier moves:

Ki blast: A blast of Ki from users body, usually palm.
Ki burst: A burst of ki from the users body pushing away close opponents.
Flash step: Moving at incredible speeds, usually to appear behind an opponent.
After image: User moves so fast they leave an after image, similiar to the flash step.

Ki and Aura colour: Black
Signature moves: Death Carve - A black twisting mass of Ki that is shot out in a whipping motion from the palm causing an arc of sharp Ki to hurtle outwards.
Death Beam - Similar to death carve, but with Ki blasts from the users palms. Around the beam spirals another smaller vine of Ki that powers up the tip of the beam.
Transformations unlocked:
Power level: 2300


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Post  foderico on Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:35 pm

Description

Name: Rankuru
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Class: Elite

Physical appearance: A tall really well built physical stature, a indistintive tail and a scar running down his left eye (not blinded) and several scars on his back the most distinctive being one from his right shoulder to his lower left back
Eye colour: Black
Hair style/colour: Black spikey hair just passing his shoulders
Armour: Wears a black jumpsuit beneath his sayan armour with the shoulder guards but not the crotch guard, this armour is accompnied with a long black cape which is weighed down by chains running through the inside
Scouter: A red scouter at 100% efficency

Bio

Personality: Tactical and reserved, does not opress the lower class but still demands there respect, no favour to other elites either
History: Born into the elite class, spent years overshadowed by his brother who is one of the Sayian Kings personal guards, spent years trying to catch up to his brother but to no avail.
Inborn power level: 8

Fighting capablities

Solidier moves:

Ki blast: A blast of Ki from users body, usually palm.
Ki burst: A burst of ki from the users body pushing away close opponents.
Flash step: Moving at incredible speeds, usually to appear behind an opponent.
After image: User moves so fast they leave an after image, similiar to the flash step.

Ki and aura colour: Black
Signature moves: Multi/Earth line blast (A beam fired at the ground to cause lines of energy explosions)

Transformations unlocked: None
Power level: 2300


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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Tullius on Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:53 pm

Character sheet

Description

Name: Tin-yon
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Class: Lower class

Physical appearance: Very wiry, tall build, doesn't look very strong but the core muscles are there. Has quite a long, smooth tail, due to his height he generally looks quite stretched out.
Eye colour: Black
Hair style/colour: Black, Mid length, tied-up very roughly with whatever he lays his hands on in the morning, usually just a bit of string.
Armour: Saiyan Armour Model 2 - Quite an outdated model, picked for the freedom of mobility. Wears a black jumpsuit under the chest armour, it has no shoulder pads or crotch pads, allows ease of movement.
Scouter: Green scouter. Usually works but due to the "enhacements" he has made to it, it often malfunctions or just freezes altogether.

Bio

Personality: He has his head in the clouds most of the time, likes to tamper with technology and is seen as a bit of a lay about. Although many people think he is a waste of space, if he feels strongly enough about something, or someone, he will fight until his dying breath.
History: During the early years of his life his instructors grew so impatient with him that they eventually gave up trying to teach him any combat techniques. They would simply punish him for not being being a "true" Saiyan. It was because of his inability to learn by watching that they could not figure out how to properly discipline and teach him. Instead he learnt by practicing techniques in his own time. Spending time concentrating on his own flow of Ki in his body and developed unorthodox combat techniques.
Inborn power level: 3

Fighting capablities

Solidier moves:

Ki blast: A blast of Ki from users body, usually palm.
Ki burst: A burst of ki from the users body pushing away close opponents.
Flash step: Moving at incredible speeds, usually to appear behind an opponent.
After image: User moves so fast they leave an after image, similiar to the flash step.

Ki and aura colour: Purple
Signature moves: Seismic blast - He sends a series of Ki blasts, into the ground around him, unbalancing any surrounding foes and if the ground is already unstable it has the possibility of causing a fissure, splitting open the ground. (This could only happen if the ground was really unstable and Tin-yon was really concentrating.)
Transformations unlocked: (None to begin with)
Power level: 300
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Mizo on Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:39 pm

BEEP BEEP BEEP

The sound of Diedara's scouter pulsating with new orders. He sat on a battered landscape, the training ground of the lower class. He sat alone, scanning the power levels emanating from the busily training warriors surrounding him. He pressed the briefing button on his scouter, it jammed.

"Piece of shit"

Diedara slammed the machine and it fluttered into life before his left eye. It read;

Planet: Vegeta
Mission: You are to accompany two of the Elites too a liaison with an unsuspecting ambassador from the planet Zeal. You are to follow orders given to you by your superiors. If they are incapacitated in anyway, you are to remove whatever threat there is to the planet. Meeting point Alpha 1300 hours. This mission is of up most importance.


Diedara hated 'escort missions' the only reason why a lower class like himself was asked to go was the make the Elites seem more dominating. He would do no talking, simply look scruffy and inferior to the elites, who were the ones negotiating. He sighed, but knew he had to follow orders for now, he concentrated his energy and pushed it out from underneath him, now in flight he blasted towards the meeting point. His black aura was seen by the Elite waiting for him, upon landing this Elite laughed.

"Black Ki?! Hahahaha how impure! So you're the runt to follow me, you know your place, don't you, little slave?"

"I know the place given to me."

The Elite slammed his fist into Diedara's stomach.

"You will address me as Sir! Is that understood weakling?"

Diedara gasping for breath on his knees coughed and lurched to his feet.

"Yes...Sir."

This guy will get it first when we take over....

"Good little pet, now stay quiet whilst we wait for the others."

Similar messages were sent to the two Saiyans named Tin-yon and Rankuru via their scouters.

(In other words Fod and Mark are part of this mission)


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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Ninjasteve on Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:54 pm

Character sheet

Description

Name: Kanzo Kaarn
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Class: Elite

Physical appearance: Regal and majestic. He holds himself with pride and aloofness displaying the arrogance common off his class. He is physically fit due to the rigors of training but his body shows he has clearly never experienced real combat.
Eye colour: Blue
Hair style/colour: Black short and tied in a knot
Armor: Expensive, custom made perfectly suited to his body. Provides adequate protection whilst clearly displaying his social position. The armor is purple with shoulder pads and family marking on the front of the tabard.
Scouter: State of the art and accurate to the exact power level. Blue

Bio

Personality: Arrogant and proud he has recently followed his father’s footsteps as an Saiyan commander. His family have distant links to the King saiyan. He has been taught from a young age to believe that the lower classes are unable to reach the same levels of abilities mainly due to their idleness and tactical cluelessness. He dreads his upcoming position as a head of a squad of saiyans preferring the company of other elites equal to his wit and ability. He is vain but not cruel and ignorant with much to learn about the real world outside his families protection and his father’s shadow. What he really strives for is his father’s approval and acceptance.
Inborn power level: 3

Fighting capablities

Solidier moves:

Ki blast: A blast of Ki from users body, usually palm.
Ki burst: A burst of ki from the users body pushing away close opponents.
Flash step: Moving at incredible speeds, usually to appear behind an opponent.
After image: User moves so fast they leave an after image, similiar to the flash step.

Ki and Aura colour:Blue
Signature move –Nova flare – A flare of blue light is sent floating forwards or left in place it waits moments before exploding in a brilliant blue light damaging or killing anything closeby.
Transformations unlocked:None
Power level: 300


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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Mizo on Mon Dec 06, 2010 4:46 pm

BEEP BEEP BEEP

Planet: Vegeta
Mission: You are to meet an important envoy from the planet Zeal. You will be accompanied by another Elite, Shin Kaizen, and a further two lower class. Your mission is to receive the technological backing of the planet, by any means necessary. Off planetary allowances will be made.


Was the message blaring in Kanto Kaarn's scouter piece.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  foderico on Mon Dec 06, 2010 9:01 pm

Rankuru read the message on his scouter, another embassy mission, feels like walking into a trap as always, however as a saiyan a trap was more of a convniant fight. after charging his ki into his feet and bursting through the air in rapid flight he smashed into the ground next to the other two saiyans.

"you have a black Ki?, how impressive" says the other elite while spitting at the feet of the lesser saiyan.

"You may wish to mock one of the lesser of our race but save it for the ambassador, i dont think this is a normal mission"

"And why is that Rakuru?" spat the elite

"How often are embassy missions of the utmost highest importance?" countered Rankuru while checking the powerlevel of the elite

220 hmm, clearly not as powerful as he likes to think and the other one?
Wondered rankuru slowly turning his scouter to the third saiyan.


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Post  Ninjasteve on Tue Dec 07, 2010 1:28 am

As Kanzo approched the meeting site he noticed that other Saiyans had already arrived. Two other elites where already there and a scruffy looking lower class. Kanzo scowled, did these lower classes have no pride? This lower class clearly had no respect for his betters. Landing gracefully just steps from the other they noticed and turned to face him.

"Ahh finally some decent company. How are things with your father boy?"

"My father is well Kaizon."

He caught the eye off the lower class. The saiyan stared at him. There was something about him. Something hidden within his eyes, a defiance veiled but clearly existent behind this facade of loyalty.
I shall have to watch this one he thought to himself.
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Post  Tullius on Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:15 am

BEEP BEEP BEEP

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BEEP BEEP BEEP

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BEEP BEEP BEEP

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Tin!!! Tin! Your scanner!



Planet: Vegeta
Mission: You are to accompany two of the Elites too a liaison with an unsuspecting ambassador from the planet Zeal. You are to follow orders given to you by your superiors. If they are incapacitated in anyway, you are to remove whatever threat there is to the planet. Meeting point Alpha 1300 hours. This mission is of utmost importance.


Hmmf... Guess I'd better get going then.

He wiped the sweat from his morning training session off of himself, donned his armor and set off towards the meeting point.

* * * * *

Is this everyone then? Are we ready to get going?

Impatient as ever runt! If they've sent you on this mission it must not be as important as they made out...


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Post  Mizo on Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:45 pm

"Hahaha, would you look at these two depressing examples of the lower scum!" Kaizen continued to bellow.

"Enough Kaizen..." Rankuru ordered.

"Hmph, you're no fun. Let's get this damn thing over so I can get back to whipping obedience into the other little runts like these."

Kaizen was one of the strictest punishers of disobedience, he was part of the Semper Fi, whenever a lower showed signs of heresy they were sent to the Semper Fi. Diedara knew them all to well, they were the cause of the scars on his fists and his back. Kaizen himself had caused dozens of those scars, but it wasn't like he would remember Diedara's face, he was always to consumed in the blood lust. With Kaizen's last comment Diedara's fists clenched and his power level rose slightly to 250. Thankfully no one's scouter was in scan mode, and it went unnoticed.

"I think it would be prudent for you to lead, Commander Kaarn. I'll take the back and keep an eye on these two weaklings haha!"

Kaarn nodded and without anything more blasted off towards the location, Rankuru quickly followed.

"Move it!"

Diedara looked back at Tin-yon, showing his hatred for the elites in his eyes, Tin-yon glanced back. They both took off towards the meeting point with Kaizen closely following them, stopping them from communicating. Finally they reached the meeting zone and before them stood four large robots, one red, one blue, one yellow and one black and orange, the last one being the most magnificent. It walked forwards towards Kaarn who stood at the front of the group, Kaizen and Rankuru slightly behind him, and Diedara and Tin-yon further behind still at the sides.

"I am the leader of Zeal's Mech unit. I'm here to tell you we have no intention of handing our planet over to you savage monkeys."

"What!? How dare you!" Kaizen yelled as he dashed forward charging a ki shot in his palm.

Before he managed to fire his shot, the orange and red mech had fired a lazer, piercing straight through Kaizen's armour.

"Guh..." Kaizen fell flat on his face.

"Our technology is more than a match for your brute strength. You're move, Saiya-jin."


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Post  foderico on Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:25 pm

Well, this started off great, i should have know Kaizen would be put down immediatly, looking at the mech suits the orange and black is the most powerful, however the lesser suits seem to be battle hardened but with critical hits to the armour they wouldnt last long, when it comes down to it eliminating the orange and black is the most important, but by the formation the lesser suits are here to defend it, clearly by the models that is the offence suit to three defence suits, that attack was also extremely powerful for a lazer of its size but with enough ki it could be deflected possibily to one of the defensive suits,

Rankurus feet shifted slowly to ensure a beter footing in order for rapid movement which he immediatly was anticipating

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Post  Mizo on Tue Dec 07, 2010 8:31 pm

The three mech suits behind the orange and black suddenly lurched into action, their right and left arms, depending on their position to the leader, began to morph. From their tips the hand like feelers changed to wide and thick shields. The two at the side of the leader slammed their shields to the ground, covering almost the hole of the front body of the offensive mech, but leaving a space for that lazer to poke through. The mech behind the leader produced two shields and covered the leader from behind but leaving its own torso open. Rankuru flash stepped behind the group to study the rear defence as he did so two machine gun barrels emerged from the rear guards chest and shot a volley of machine gun fire his way. Rankuru dodged the bullets and flash stepped back to his earlier position.

"Shit..." he cursed.

"Looks like we're going to have to work together..." Diedara sighed, sinking into his battle stance.

From the well defended leader mech came a dull hum that became louder and louder.

"He's charging that lazer again!"

The mech's braced themselves as the leader aimed down his arm at the group of saiyans.

"YORO'S CANNON!!!" yelled Yoro, the leading mech.

The orange beam came out as a thick blob to start with before suddenly stretching out to cover a wider area. It hurtled towards the group. Diedara managed to dash into the air away from the blast, he looked around for the others.

Sayain's power levels: Diedara = 300, Rankuru = 300, Tin-yon = 300, Kanzo Kaarn = 300.
Mech's power levels: Yoro (Leader) = 200, Hino (Left) = 100, Kira (Right) = 100, Osu (Rear) = 150, Yoro's cannon = 450.

For the purposes of this fight I'll mark my own posts.

Mech Post

Action:- 2
0-1 Boooooooring
2-3 Hmmm, some nice punches and ki blasts
4-5 Stop! I can't see through the blood!

Detail:- 3
0-1 Who did what now?
2-3 I know whats happened quite well
4-5 Wow, that's beautiful. I know everything, the character's feelings, movements, everything.

Dialogue:- 4
0-1 I cant tell what is speech and what isn't
2-3 I can just tell who is speaking
4-5 You've used colours for speech, italics for thought, nice

Statistics and playing to them:- 4
0-1 Ok, you just god modded and where are your end of post statistics?
2-3 Your still acting better than your power level, but your statistics are there atleast
4-5 You Roleplayed well according to your powerlevel and your statistics are done properly

Total: 13/20
Power level gain: 0


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Post  foderico on Tue Dec 07, 2010 8:59 pm

If we hit those sheilds head on we could get through but it would be suicide, its not like we can use the lower class to attack it, they wouldnt chareg blindly to the death for us the armour has one major weakpoint

"Like the lower class said we need to work as a team right now" Rankuru commanded to the others while escaping the range of the blast.
"If you can occupy the cannons fire away from me i can charge up an attack to hit them from the ground a massive weakpoint of the mechs, it will take me a little longer for me to charge than it does for that YORO cannon to charge, also watch the fire from the deffencive turrets within the smaller armour, there not there to kill just to distract and pen us into position of the cannon fire stay out of its way i want minimal casulties here but i need co-operation and Class i regardless when your dead" Ranukru urged of his Saiyan kin around him
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Post  Ninjasteve on Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:16 pm

Kanzo froze as his fellow Elite was destroyed by the lazer. Could an Elite be taken down so easily? In the shock of actual combat Kanzo found himself unable to move. Years of training vanished to be replaced with pure terror as the mech began to fire once again. He could do nothing to save himself simply watching as the lazer approched him. His own mortality suddenly seemed so apparant.

Suddenly he felt himself grasped around his waste and sped into the air narrely avoiding the blast. He felt the heat sear his skin and covered his face. Somebody had hold of him and had saved him at the last moment. His fear replaced with embarrisment he didn't even want to look at who had grabbed him.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Tullius on Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:46 am

Tin-yon regained his composure and shot a disdainful look at Kanzo, quickly averting his gaze, lest he be punished later. He stood for a moment feeling each and every wave of pain, the lazer blast didn't even directly hit him and he had still received 3rd degree burns on the arm he had thrown around Kanzo. He blocked out the pain as best he could.

Best to keep my mind focused in the moment and not on the pain. Just block it out the same way you blocked all those lashes.

He watched as Rankuru and Diedara devised a plan. He had studied Rankuru's training regime quite often, paying particular attention to his ground attack. It was from this move that he had studied and developed his own technique.

He quickly surveyed the area around the enemies and realised that there was only one weakpoint where Rankuru's attack would be able to do any significant damage. Thinking quickly Tin-yon began to charge his own ground attack, not at full strength, just enough to dislodge and unbalance the robots guarding Yoro, giving Rankuru a wider window to inflict more damage.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Pain on Thu Dec 09, 2010 6:57 pm

(This is Mizo/Tom btw if you haven't read the thing I wrote in the speakeasy section)

The hive of mechs stirred. The saiyans flew above them plotting, one of them had been hit. Within his suit Yoro smiled. His cannon was charging itself again, his arm like limb felt warm as it held the control. Suddenly two of the saiyans made a move, one charged an attack, the other arrived to the ground later but had already sent his attack through the ground. Yoro's cannon would be ready to fire before the first saiyans attack had the chance to take effect, but if they were out of formation they were all vulnerable to counter attack.

"Hebi formation!!!" Yoro yelled down his microphone.

Hino and Kira blasted forwards whilst Osu lowered his shields to the floor and leant forwards. Yoro rested on Osu's back and clipped into it magnetically. From this position he aimed his cannon directly at Rankuru who was now being surrounded by Kira and Hino and made calculations for his attack. The two mechs attempted to grab hold of Rankuru's arms, one to stop his technique and second to hold him still for Yoro to increase the accuracy of his shot. The shock wave from Tin-yon came, it shook the ground harshly. As soon as Osu felt the first tremor his pneumatic arms elongated shooting Yoro into the air. Yoro still aiming, flipped forwards, and from his earlier calculations aimed from his steady position in the air towards Rankuru.

"YORO'S CANNON!!!" he yelled, this time the beam was much more concentrated and funnelled straight towards Rankuru's chest.

Osu moved to all fours, facing Tin-yon and from his back emerged a grenade launcher. Pump, pump, pump. He fired three grenades in a crescent shape, hoping to hit Tin.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Mizo on Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:13 pm

Pain's post

Action:- 3
0-1 Boooooooring
2-3 Hmmm, some nice punches and ki blasts
4-5 Stop! I can't see through the blood!

Detail:- 3
0-1 Who did what now?
2-3 I know whats happened quite well
4-5 Wow, that's beautiful. I know everything, the character's feelings, movements, everything.

Dialogue:- 3
0-1 I cant tell what is speech and what isn't
2-3 I can just tell who is speaking
4-5 You've used colours for speech, italics for thought, nice

Statistics and playing to them:- 3
0-1 Ok, you just god modded and where are your end of post statistics?
2-3 Your still acting better than your power level, but your statistics are there atleast
4-5 You Roleplayed well according to your powerlevel and your statistics are done properly

Total: 12/20
Power level gain: 0

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Fools, trust that god damn elite to charge in head first!

Diedara floated for a moment and waited to see if the plan could be pulled off. He looked to Kanzo who's face was frozen in a state of shock.

Pathetic...

When looking back at the battle he gulped. The overwhelming odds appeared that Rankuru was going to be K.I.A, he had to do something. He flash stepped down behind Rankuru just as the two mech's came to his sides.

"Rankuru!! Get down!!!" Diedara yelled sinking into a formation.

As Yoro fired his brilliant orange beam towards Rankuru Diedara's black Ki enveloped him.

"Kanzo!! I need your help!!"

Without looking whether Rankuru had dodged or not Diedara pulled back his right arm, his palm facing down. Dripping almost from his palm a black globule of Ki hovered for a moment before Diedara flung it forwards. The Ki flattened out and hurtled outwards in an arc towards Yoro's beam.

"DEATH CARVE!!!"

The orange and black Ki met in a mighty flash of energy, the whereabouts of the mechs and Rankuru between them were unknown. Diedara's palm was now facing outwards, his left hand holding on to his right elbow. He was pushing his arc to beat back Yoro's cannon. He was losing.

"KANZOOOO!!!!"

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Mizo's post

Action:- 3
0-1 Boooooooring
2-3 Hmmm, some nice punches and ki blasts
4-5 Stop! I can't see through the blood!

Detail:- 3
0-1 Who did what now?
2-3 I know whats happened quite well
4-5 Wow, that's beautiful. I know everything, the character's feelings, movements, everything.

Dialogue:- 3
0-1 I cant tell what is speech and what isn't
2-3 I can just tell who is speaking
4-5 You've used colours for speech, italics for thought, nice

Statistics and playing to them:- 3
0-1 Ok, you just god modded and where are your end of post statistics?
2-3 Your still acting better than your power level, but your statistics are there atleast
4-5 You Roleplayed well according to your powerlevel and your statistics are done properly

Total: 14/20
Power level gain: 0

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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  foderico on Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:16 pm

Damn!! with them not acting in formation were to open

"Kanzo Hit the gun NOW!" Rankuru pleaded while being pounded repeatedly by two mech suits, every single punch was constantly being baraged against him while his hands were grabbed, unable to use the charged ki it was unleashed with barely enough force to free his arms from the mech suits.

Got to act defensivly now and keep these two defence bots away from protecting the main mech, they cant seem to hit me to well however that machine gun fire could cause a problem

As Kira was throwing mechanised punches with imence speed Rankuru calculated the Kira was simply trying to distract him, as Hino remained at the back waiting.

When i tried to go round the back he used the gattling gun to try and immediatly kill me, he just reacted, but now hes timing his shot, maybe i can time it better

Suddenly Rankuru his hit by Kira and kncoked back "NOW" shrieks the mech suit as Hino begins shotting towards Rankuru.

Got him

Suddenly Rankuru flashsteps behind Kira grabs both arms of the mech and flashsteps back to his previous position in a blink of an eye as the gatling fire is launched at them both. Rankuru holding the mech into to position begins to emit a black ki as the struggle becomes more and more desperate.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Ninjasteve on Mon Dec 13, 2010 10:23 pm

Kanzo landed roughly as Tin Yon dropped him and struggled to regain his composure. His muscles strung with the burns from the blast. He tried to survey the situation which was growing increasingly hopeless. This was surely his forte, to tactically plan out his next move whilst out of the firing line. He surveyed the battle for openings.

Yoro is completely engaged with diadara and the other mechs don’t seem to be ready to help him.

Kanzo began to power up his attack unnoticed by the Mechs. He could not fail now! He could not stand another embarrassment in front of these lower classes. Feeling an overwhelming urge to redeem his past failure Kanzo felt previously unattainable energy flood to his arms this was accompanied with a surge of confidence.

NOVA FLARE” He screamed pointing both his palms towards Yoro.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Pain on Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:36 pm

Kira and Hino unleashed a burst of bullets from their machine guns. The had not realised their folly until it was too late. The bullets panged and pierced through the thick armour of their mech suits. Many of the controls burst into flames and Kira's leg was hit. Hino had avoided any direct hit to his actual body, but his mech was done for. Kira went limp in Rankuru's arms and fell to the floor. Mean while the fierce battle between Diedara and Yoro continued, the orange and black ki pulsing and beaming with brilliant light. The ground beneath Diedara's fight began to crumble as he struggled to fight back the power of Yoro's cannon. Suddenly a renewed Kanzo took it upon himself to end the energy battle. His technique 'Nova flare' flickered out, seemingly weak, but the longer the flare was apparent the more dangerous it seemed. From it emitted a sense of foreboding, every saiyan and zealot alike noticed it, but too late. Diedara caught the power level of Kanzo at the time, 500, impossible. The flare exploded in a beautiful and devastating flash, almost entirely blowing Yoro away. The shockwave hit Rankuru, Diedara and Kanzo the hardest, Osu and Tin would get it the least. Diedara let himself be carried by the wave, his energy was spent on the bout with Yoro and he crashed into a rock, and began to take some respite. Yoro's mech suit lay decimated beyond recognition, the front shell was destroyed showing Yoro's true form. A pale grey humanoid like figure, with long thin limbs and two short arm like limbs from his chest. His eyes were two large slits opening to reveal completely black eyes. Dripping from various wounds was a viscous green liquid, the blood of a zealot.

"Code: Saishuu" croaked the broken body inside the mech.

Osu broke off from his confrontation and blasted towards Yoro, magnetically attaching himself once more. The attraction of the special magnets inside Osu's suit pulled Kira and Hino towards him, they connected in a violent clash.

"It's been an honour..." Osu said in a deep gruff voice.

"For Zeal!" they all yelled in unison.

The mass of broken metal that was once the finest mech unit of Zeal shook with immense energy. On their scouters the saiyans read a power level of 700 and rising. Without warning the group self destructed into a magnificent blast, causing a massive dome of destruction about a mile wide.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  foderico on Wed Dec 15, 2010 6:04 pm

After defeating the odds of two to one by out manouvering and outsmarting the mech suits Rankuru threw himself at Kira on the ground and smashed through his mech suit, then looking towards Hino he heard a code word, simply an order. As Rankurus scouter began notching up the rapid rising power level before him he heard the honourous moment of self sacrfice.

I know what that means

Get out of there NOW!

Rankuru shot off in flight to try and reach a safe radius as fast as his Ki could carry him

No good, im pretty far out now so just going to have to try and withstand it

Rankuru was around 3/4 of a mile away from the explosion, turning around he held his palms out towards the blastand surrounded himself with his Ki, forcing as much out as possible to withstand the blast. Screaming with pain as he felt his muscles tear at the sheer force used to try and witstand the blast

I wont go down here
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Ninjasteve on Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:31 pm

Kanzo found himself in a good position to quickly flee backwards. With a twinge of concern for his teamates he tried to dismiss, he leapt backwards and distanced himself as much as possible. when the blast reached him he threw what was left of his energy from his powersurge ahead of him to block the explosion. He felt the great power of the explosion but safetly held it back and suffered no injury.

sapped of energy he fell backwards into a seated position pondering the fates of his teamates.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Mizo on Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:52 pm

Rankuru struggled the best he could to withstand the incredible force. Successfully avoiding the main energy wave, Rankuru had to give way to the shock wave, he'd exhausted his energy completely and fell to the floor, barely clinging on to consciousness. Diedara's legs were totally spent in the previous power beam battle, all he could do was cover his face and take the brunt of the explosion. The powerful dome of energy crushed him against the rock he was laying against, until finally it gave way and its shrapnel flew off along with Diedara's limp body. He landed close to Kanzo's position and slid along the floor ending up in a heap not to far from Kanzo's feet. He was bloodied and slipping in and out of consciousness.

"Did...we win?" Diedara coughed not knowing which figure stood before him.

Kanzo may of said something, he might not have, but before Diedara could tell for sure two more figures appeared behind him. Diedara fell unconscious. Tin-yon had escaped the majority of the blasts, but he to had expelled most of his energy. He along with the still struggling Rankuru were dumped next to Diedara.

"Sorry we are late Kanzo Kaarn. Your father sent us." One of the new figures spoke. "You've spent almost all of your Ki, these three are done too. We have 4 regeneration tubes just recently set up by the Zeal scientists we captured. We can place all four of you inside, or are these three not worth the ki?"
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  foderico on Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:56 pm

We did it but looking at the battlefield, something doesnt add up, why are they here just now surely they were watching. Either were here to be tested or set up. And are we worth the Ki?, he got a lucky shot but as this is told later, he would have perfectly timed his chance. Keep your cool Rankuru and see what happens, don't cause any further rifts in the situation and to speak now, when not addressed would be a mistake in front of a supposed Royal, to think that im still not regarded the same as Kanzo despite what they would have witnessed, and that this lower class saiyan, Diedara, has more potential than they realise, i wont make that mistake

Rankuru began to slowly push himself from the ground to stand, but could go no further when one of the other elites began to show his level of authority and the power of Kanzo by keeping him rooted to the ground. Behind gritted teeth Rankuru stayed towards the ground.
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Re: Have some pride!!

Post  Ninjasteve on Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:21 pm

Kanzo struggled to focus. The question shocked him. The emotion and exitement of battle lingered within him. His comrades had fought and bled with him and they had only just survived the confrontation alive. Some of these lowers had handles themselves better than him. He felt close to scolding the new arrival and then in an instant his facade was repaired. He stood up straight brushing himself off.

"Hardly comrade....However some of them proved themselves usefull almost. We should help them recover so we may use them again.

The new arrival scoffed and looked down upon the injured saiyans.

"Looks like they lacked any ability. Collapsing like this leaving you to deal with things on you're own. They should be punished for there lack of skill."

Kanzo simply nodded a feeling of shame creeping through his body.
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